Here is an image taken of our written feedback (prior to previous slides/post). This feedback focused more on the content, for example different styles of shots and equipment (using tracks, and what style of shots could be used to create an atmosphere we wanted, as well as cameras [XF100]) Our main points of feedback were to ensure that we create a better structure for the piece, which I feel is quite hard at this stage, because with documentary, it's unpredictable, however it is possible and therefore will be taken to consideration.
Another feedback point was to ensure that we emphasised on the story and the characters, meaning even though it is a refuge, the story is about Pam, the owner, therefore we need to ensure the story focuses on her, rather than a lot of animal shots and stories.
This feedback gave us way to work on finalising our treatment and then waiting to see whether or project is to be commissioned or not!
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